First Draft
This is Ben's first attempt at the magazine article, he showed us the article during the session and asked for feedback in order for him to improve the article and get another step closer to the final product. Our article is on the left and the professional article is on the right. The feedback Ben received allowed Him to realise the formatting wasn't quite correct just yet and there was a lacking amount of text.
Second Draft
The second draft of the magazine article saw Ben look to improve the content and the typeface, He found that when the article was printed the words came out too small for anyone to read because of this he looked to improve this by making the writing larger. The bullet pointed column is where ben received feedback on this draft because as you can see the spacing is too large because of this Ben will need to improve the spacing and include more information.
Third Draft
This is Ben's third draft of the magazine article and as you can see there is a great improvement in the amount of text on the main article this is apparent in the way it looks as a final product because it visually looks full and because of this it matched the Radar article perfectly because of this we know the visuals are correct. Ben has improved the way the text fits around photographs and the drop capital making the article look professional.
